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Dead Space (demo)

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swish_swish
File Details
Clone Campaigns required?: Yes
Style: Role Playing Strategy
Number of scenarios: 1 (duh its a demo)
This is my version of dead space (i got is as close of dead space as i could.) please comment i will love a revew!!!! and if you like it tell me to do anouther!

UPDATE: this is the rubish version so DONT download this unles you like this sort of thing for some odd reason the FULL version will come out soon.
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Gen_Rhys_Dallows
Staff
Rating
1.6
Breakdown
Playability1.0
Balance1.0
Creativity2.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions2.0
Alright, comrade. I gave a fair warning in your thread. Here goes.


Playability: 1
Nothing happened. There were a few lines of text and then you walked and clicked on stuff. Nothing really attention-grabbing, and the map ended in about 2 minutes.

Balance: 1
Again, Nothing happened. No fights, not a single shot fired. The most violent thing was too NPCs dropping dead for no reason.

Creativity: 2
I haven't played much of Dead Space, but I thought the concept was nice for what it was, and horror is a rare thing in SWGB. But you've got a lot of work to do if you hope to pull it off right.

Map Design: 2
I would have given you a 1. But I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt, since you've shown great improvement in your thread. I look forward to the enhanced map much more than the current one.

Story/Instructions: 1
There was no instruction menu, and hardly any speech, besides something about a tram system being shut out. Sounds more like Half-Life than Dead Space, personally. For people who don't actually know the story of Dead Space (such as myself) you need to be able to clear things up for us. Also, you need to work on both your grammar, and spelling.

Additional Comments:

1. Fix grammar/spelling
2. Provide story
3. Use sound effects
4. Improve map

A DEMO is meant to show us a sample of the quality and fun we'd expect to see in the full campaign. If this is all I'm going to see in the full scenario, I wont download it.

But. You've done a great deal in a small time..span in terms of your map design. But a good looking map WILL NOT speak for itself, no matter how pretty you can make it.

I expect to see much better in the next release.
swish_swish
File Author
i know as i said this is only the DEMO and i put it out befor you started helping me AND said this was the rubish version. lol
johnny595
Rating
1.2
Breakdown
Playability1.0
Balance1.0
Creativity2.0
Map Design1.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Playability: 1
From the start of the map until the end there were no enemies. I thinked that was strange and should be a trigger problem but I came back here and saw Dallows comment. There's such no playability. there are just 5 sentences(without count the small instructions).

Balance: 1
No enemies, no balance.

Creativity: 2
Well, I don't know the history of Dead Space. It looks like a good game. Anyways just work a bit more in history and tell more about were you get the Idea.

Map Design: 1
I gave you a 1 just because of the asteroid canals. I saw the topic you made in the forum. I agree with the others. Space walls are better. I'm making a scenario for my 403rd campaign and I couldn't use space walls(They're computers in my scenario^^)so I used asteroid canals. If you are using them, dl a utility scenario (dl SEACKER scenario) and see how he makes the scenario looks 3D using different sorts of walls.

Story/Instructions: 1
At least a page of instructions...

Additional Comments:Work a bit more on the full campaign and, please, make instructions for it.

P.S.(To Dallows): I already e-mail you in your MSN(the_mario...). Please contact me back.
Gen_Rhys_Dallows
Staff
I'm looking in my inbox now, but I'm not seeing any messages from you, johnny. Try my Yahoo one, the MSN one is cluttered to hell.

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Rating
1.4
Breakdown
Playability1.0
Balance1.0
Creativity2.0
Map Design1.5
Story/Instructions1.5
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Size:3.55 KB
Added:08/15/09