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Naboo City Template

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tk_12
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Clone Campaigns required?: Yes
Can be used in campaigns if u give me credit. this is my first one... please review it.
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ninjasintheskies
Rating
1.0
Rating: 1
What in bloody hell is this slop job mess? It looks nothing like the nubian cities or any where close. If there was a distance between the actual thing and yours, yours would be at the other end of the universe.

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Holy s*** my eyes were bleeding.
oh_em_gee
Rating
2.5
Rating: 2.5

Well...It's not as bad as Ninja was saying it was. I think that is a mildly detailed city. Not a "Slop job mess". Im not sure if it will be used for anything, because most of it is just military. I'm sure this took a long time to make, so you get an A+ for effort. You could try to make it more of a "lived in" city, like adding citizens in a lot of places. Also, shouldn't Naboo have parks? Add a couple parks. Use a bunch of a fish to simulate a fountain. Then you can add a bunch of citizens around it. Or maybe even a pond. Have some citizens "fishing". The possibilities are endless!

Additional Comments:
Ehh....Try a little harder.

[Edited on 08/04/08 @ 04:36 PM]

BleXeze
Rating
1.0
Im going to be honest with you tk_12, i didn't really like this at all.
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Lack of unit variation, and they were in enourmous masses randomly placed. And may i ask you what completely random Stormtroopers, AT-ATs, Clone Troopers, etc etc.. were doing there? >_>

Very poor map design, there was no sign of any kind of terrain mixing. And redwood trees really dont fit in on Naboo.
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Additional Comments
May i suggest that you improve your map design in future scenarios/templates?

Take a look at this Forest making article, i learnt how to make decent and nice looking forests with it.

http://swgb.heavengames.com/article.php?id=36

[Edited on 08/07/08 @ 01:13 PM]

Drunkungan
Rating
1.5
The city was not very good. There were no Naboo canals, no grassland, no peaceful lake areas with houses. No, it was all HUGEASS swarms of military as far as the eye could see with ALL road 1. WAY too much military. And, If this is a NABOO CITY, WTF is with all the stormtroopers and wookiees and republic forces??????? This is not a Naboo City, it's a random multiciv fortress in the middle of nowhere.
jake mackay
Rating
2.0
Rating: 2
Seemed easy to make and rushed. No eye candy or recognisable characters. Everything seemed very militant and there were no civilians anywhere. It seemed to be random prefab shelters and military units everywhere and nothing else. It had the potential but you should've added things like rivers, civilians, buildings, farms, trees and other eye candy elements... Perhaps a waterfall?

Additional Comments: Needs alot of work...

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Added:08/01/08