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Naboo City Template

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tk_12
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Clone Campaigns required?: Yes
Can be used in campaigns if u give me credit. this is my first one... please review it.
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ninjasintheskies
Rating
1.0
Rating: 1
What in bloody hell is this slop job mess? It looks nothing like the nubian cities or any where close. If there was a distance between the actual thing and yours, yours would be at the other end of the universe.

Additional Comments:
Holy s*** my eyes were bleeding.
oh_em_gee Downloading. Review when done. Oh, Ninjasintheskies? I think you need to get your eyes checked. Because they seem to bleed a lot.

[Edited on 08/04/08 @ 04:30 PM]

oh_em_gee
Rating
2.5
Rating: 2.5

Well...It's not as bad as Ninja was saying it was. I think that is a mildly detailed city. Not a "Slop job mess". Im not sure if it will be used for anything, because most of it is just military. I'm sure this took a long time to make, so you get an A+ for effort. You could try to make it more of a "lived in" city, like adding citizens in a lot of places. Also, shouldn't Naboo have parks? Add a couple parks. Use a bunch of a fish to simulate a fountain. Then you can add a bunch of citizens around it. Or maybe even a pond. Have some citizens "fishing". The possibilities are endless!

Additional Comments:
Ehh....Try a little harder.

[Edited on 08/04/08 @ 04:36 PM]

Rebel_CIS_Sup Trying varying your structures a little across the city.
ninjasintheskies Why don't you f*** off oh_em_gee? My eyes are fine, it's only when I see some bad work that they bleed. (No offense to the creator.)
oh_em_gee Careful now! You don't want that aneurism to make your head bleed!
ninjasintheskies What in bloody hell is an aneurism?

[Edited on 08/05/08 @ 10:38 PM]

BleXeze XD

"–noun Pathology.
a permanent cardiac or arterial dilatation usually caused by weakening of the vessel wall."

I don't really get it :p
Found on a random dictonary site found through Google

[Edited on 08/06/08 @ 01:58 PM]

BleXeze
Rating
1.0
Im going to be honest with you tk_12, i didn't really like this at all.
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Lack of unit variation, and they were in enourmous masses randomly placed. And may i ask you what completely random Stormtroopers, AT-ATs, Clone Troopers, etc etc.. were doing there? >_>

Very poor map design, there was no sign of any kind of terrain mixing. And redwood trees really dont fit in on Naboo.
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Additional Comments
May i suggest that you improve your map design in future scenarios/templates?

Take a look at this Forest making article, i learnt how to make decent and nice looking forests with it.

http://swgb.heavengames.com/article.php?id=36

[Edited on 08/07/08 @ 01:13 PM]

ninjasintheskies Ah, some one who agrees on the rating.
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Added:08/01/08