Tales of the Old Republic: The Naboo War (Demo)
Posted on 11/14/07 @ 04:58 PM (updated 11/18/07
Tales of the Old Republic
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The Naboo War (Demo)
I have based this campaign (mainly the first scenario) on two of my former campaigns. This scenario is the first of the first campaign. I plan on making 3 campaigns, all involving the same characters. The scenario in this Demo is mainly an intro scenario, not many battles and action yet...
The campaigns take place around 1000 BBY. Ryan Etern is a young adult who lives with his uncle in the quiet town of Theed, on Naboo...
I still consider myself a newbie in making scenarios, so any critisism are welcome.
Update (18.11.07): I have changed a few things in it, diplomacies should not be changing from now on, and you'll get a message when someone joins your group.
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I was very playable, that's all the good I can say, the only drawback to the whole campaign was the way you had to have both characters with you. I didn't know you had to take both Ryan and Heather to Sa'ba'. So, it would be nice in the full version that you put some work in it like:
"Heather has become part of your party, you can now select her."
Then show her current position on the screen, with snap view to this location. Get it? That would make it better to understand... Also with the uncle part... I had to click everyone in the city to see who he was... But, that would help us RPG players get into your campaign.
Nevermind about my first Balance review I made earlier.
The bursa's, like my first review, are still hard to fight. I would suggest a somewhat easier animal to face instead... It was good, just, sometimes, Ryan was almost killed a few time's in here. But, Still not bad for a newcomer.
Now, I love the way you put all this creativity into this campaign:
1st, I liked how you made it seem like just a bunch of teenagers talking gossip about who's going to date who.
2nd, I liked how you made that farmer be all snoopy and say, "Get off my land you crazy whooliganes."
3rd, I like how you did the romance kinda thing with Heather and Ryan... Oh, good choice on the name Ryan ;) . Cause My name is Ryan and I could really put myself into the Star Wars universe with this campaign.
Map Design: 4
Map design was great, it was really enjoyable to see how much work you put into the map design. But, I did have a bit of a problem with the map blending... Since the characters would be going through the swamp... Try changing it to a more swampy feel.
I knew what to do the whole time I was playing it. It was a nice story, I liked how it turned from a gossip kinda begining to a full on action game. Good work.
Overall I would have to say that I really enjoyed this campaign. I would suggest this game for anyone looking for a good campaign to play. You really good for a newcomer to the the community here. Nice job.
[Edited on 11/19/07 @ 02:52 PM]