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TRAILS OF JC

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DarthDementous
File Details
Clone Campaigns required?: Yes
Style: Role Playing Only
Number of scenarios: 8
The Dark Army has destroyed your villiage. Find shelter and meet friends and enemies. Travel the galaxy and watch out for bounty hunters. Join the Royal Army, the resistance against the Dark Army. DECIDE YOUR FATE IN THIS OPEN ENDED STORY.
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JabbaTheFish
Rating
1.2
Breakdown
Playability1.0
Balance1.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Playability: 1
It wasnt really fun at all. There was no change to the monotonous 'move from A to B while shooting some lame targets' game style. Why not add some proper objectives and explore all the conditions you can use?

Balance: 1
Balance just doesnt exist. You start off with one hero or a load of random units that will destroy all enemies on the map without even dropping below half health. There needs to be more enemies, possibly with encampments( would help your map design too).

Creativity: 3
The story shows hints of creativity but apart from that there is nothing. Add some more objectives and alternate objectives or omething to spruce it up a little.

Map Design: 2
SOME of the map ideas were good, but the levels were linear and most of the maps were just glorified paths with some enemies on it. Also you dont have any elevation and the only terrain is water or grass. Dont just design one line of terrain- make fully explorable cities and plains.

Story/Instructions: 1
The idea behind the story is good and has potential but you dont explain it properly at all. This isnt helped by the fact that you dont know what order to play the scenarios in. And I wont ruin the story, but the bit were it says something like ' you were shocked and ran away to a desert island' doesnt sound like a very good story to me. You should put something into the history so we can actually have some background on who JC is and who the' Dark Army' are.

Additional Comments:
I am sorry if this sounds harsh but there is no other way of putting it. You obviously know how to use triggers and design but just not put the effort in.

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Rating
1.2
Breakdown
Playability1.0
Balance1.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Statistics
Downloads:184
Favorites: [Who?]0
Size:46.63 KB
Added:12/06/05