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The Story Of Pain

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gunthor
File Details
Clone Campaigns required?: Yes
Style: Role Playing Only
Number of scenarios: 0.5
it's my first attempt to create a good campaign and FINISH it :p cuz i always leave it be after a few weeks :p

i'm only getting started with this one

(sort of beta version)just about 20 triggers or less and i just wanted to know if i have started good... pls comment, and if you are willing to rate this piece of a scx :p PLS DO, it's important for me
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gunthor
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not much reactions,...

well, maybe i just have to finish it first :p

sithlordmichael .5 scenarios.............
jedimasterhawk 0.5 scenarios? does that mean you can only play half a scenario!?!(heh,heh)
Denouement
Rating
2.2
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance2.0
Creativity3.0
Map Design3.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Judging by the fact that there are only .5 scenarios in this campaign I'm guessing that you haven't completed this yet...
Playability: 2
Well there wasn't much you could do; you could walk around and that was it. Really it was more of an interactive cutscene.

Balance: 2
Well... you couldn't die because there weren't any enemies.

Creativity: 3
I hadn't seen this type of thing before, so, er, I'll give you a 3.

Map Design: 3
Your map design is actually decent. Try adding more elevation and mix terrains a little more. More gaia stuff wouldn't hurt either.

Story/Instructions: 1
Um, the story wasn't really clear to me... The Ojectives screen had some weird stuff about a guy who was seduced by war or something... and he came from Kaltooine and went to Coruscant I think. There was a bunch of weird dialogue at the beginning of the game which I didn't quite understand and I couldn't figure out what to do for about 2 minutes.

Additional Comments:
Well since the game took about 2 minutes to "beat" (meaning there wasn't anything else I could do)you need to work on this some more.
Make the instructions clearer and speed up the cutscene!
gunthor
File Author
Thanks Denouement, this is the only reason why I posted my unfinished scx. I needed some advice to complete it. And don't worry about the instructions and stuff, I tried to come up with a good story. But it is too complicated. I will change it, improve the dialogue between the parents and the child and finish the scx. I think of making 6 scenarios in one campaign.

fowler, don't you have anything else to do than to insult everyones work ?
gunthor
File Author
Damn! I formatted my PC and thus all my scenarios. And when i thought of downloading it here again I forgot i putted it in a campaign :(

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Rating
2.2
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance2.0
Creativity3.0
Map Design3.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Statistics
Downloads:131
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Size:40.42 KB
Added:10/19/05